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2024/09/24

※ 本文節錄自 貝塔語測論證型英文寫作速成教戰 》 作者:Quentin Brand


寫作題目 Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?

There are those who say that social networking sites have had a detrimental effect on individuals as well as society and local communities. On the other hand, while I believe that such sites are mainly beneficial to the individual, I agree that they have had a damaging effect on local communities. There are many reasons why I think so.

With regard to individuals, the impact that online social media has had on each individual person has clear advantages. Firstly, people from different countries are brought together through such sites as Facebook. Before the development of technology and social networking sites, which began to appear around the early 2000s, people rarely had the chance to meet or communicate with anyone outside of their immediate circles or community. Secondly, Facebook also has groups which offer individuals a chance to meet to participate in discussions with other people who share common interests.

On the other hand, the effect Facebook and other social networking sites have had on societies and local communities can only be seen as negative. Rather than individual people taking part in the local community, they are instead choosing to take more interest in people online. Consequently, the people within local communities are no longer forming close or supportive relationships. In addition, society as a whole is becoming increasingly disjointed and fragmented as people spend more time online with people they have never met face to face and with whom they will never meet in the future.

To sum up, although social networking sites have brought individuals closer together, they have not had the same effect on society or local communities. I firmly believe that local communities should do more to try and involve local people in local activities in order to promote the future of community life.

很多人相信,社交網站(諸如臉書)對個人與社會都產生了巨大的負面衝擊。你贊同到什麼程度?

有人說,社交網站對個人、社會以及地方社區產生了不利影響。另一方面,我固然相信這類的網站主要是對個人有好處,但我也贊同它對地方社區產生了破壞性的影響。我為什麼會這麼想,理由有很多。

在個人方面,線上社群媒體對每位個別民眾的影響具有明顯的優點。首先,不同國家的人透過諸如臉書等的網站而牽連在一起。在約莫從2000 年初開始出現的科技和社交網站發展起來前,人們鮮少有機會與就近的圈子或社群以外的任何人結識或交流。其次,臉書也有社群,為個人提供機會,與其他有共同興趣的人見面,參與討論。

另一方面,臉書和其他社交網站對社會與地方社區所產生的影響只能以負面視之。個別民眾不是去投入地方社群,而反倒是選擇對網上的人抱持較大的興趣。結局就是,地方社區裡的人不再形成緊密或支援的關係。此外,隨著人們花更多的時間在網上與他們從未見過面以及將來永遠不會見面的人在一起,整個社會正變得日益支離破碎。

總而言之,雖然社交網站拉近了人與人之間的距離,但對社會或地方社群卻沒有產生相同的影響。我堅信地方社區應該要做得更多,試著去把地方民眾帶進當地活動裡,以藉此促進社區生活的未來。


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