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翻譯大師教你學寫作-高分修辭篇 V

郭岱宗老師

 
       
   

用字遣詞是化妝師

以下是英文作文中常見到的基本用語,我們就用它們來做例子,讓各位讀者一眼就知道如何立刻提昇英文寫作的用字遣詞。

寫作的常用語

Part 1

 

初級英文作文

高級英文作文

我認為

I think

I believe

I consider

I'm convinced (因為事實證明,而使人相信)

例:I think she is right.

改為

I'm convinced that she is right.  我完全相信她是對的。

I deem (視為)

例:They regard it as my responsibility.

改為

They deem it my responsibility.  他們認為這是我的責任。

I hold (堅信)

例:He believes that she'll marry him.

改為

He holds that she'll marry him.   他相信她一定會嫁給他。

Undeniably (無可否認地)

例:We all consider her as a good student.

改為

Undeniably , she is a good student.  我們絕對相信她是個好學生。

Indisputably (無可置啄地)

例:It's out of the question that we believe this message cannot be wrong.

改為

This message is indisputably true.  這個訊息絕對錯不了。

我不認為

I don't think

I don't believe

I disagree

It's challengeable (可信度不高)

例:I don't think he is successful.

改為

His success is challengeable .  我不認為他是成功的。

It's disputable (引人爭論的)

例:I disagree of his attitude.

改為

His attitude is disputable . 我不贊同他的態度。

It remains doubtful (仍不可信)

例:I still don't believe that he'll marry her.

改為

It remains doubtful that he'll marry her.  我不相信他會娶她。

可是

but

however

nonetheless

yet

◎有「比較」的意味:whereas

例:He is extroverted, whereas she is introverted.
他外向,可是她內向。

◎「沒想到」的意味:surprisingly

例:Surprisingly , she won! 但是她居然贏了!

◎有「遺憾」的意味:unfortunately

例:Unfortunately , this was only a dream. 可是,這只是一場夢。

◎有「事情不僅於此」的意味:accompanied by the fact

例1:He got married, but none of us expected that he would marry Jenny!

改為

He got married, accompanied by the fact that he married Jenny instead!  他結婚了, 不過 他娶的是 Jenny !

例2:Mary is an English major, and she is an outstanding student.

改為

Mary is an English major, accompanied by the fact that she is an outstanding student.  瑪麗是英文系的學生, 而且十分優秀。

例如

for example

for instance

A supporting fact is (有事實根據的例子)

例:He is happy - a supporting fact is that he smiles all the time.
他很快樂,例如,他臉上常掛著微笑。

A sad fact is (令人難過的例子)

例:He is merciless - a sad fact is that he tortures animals.
他很無情,例如,他會折磨動物。

A pleasant fact is (令人愉快的例子)

例:His efforts are rewarded - a pleasant fact is that he is graduating summa cum laude.
他的努力得到回報。例如, 他即將以優異的成績畢業。
※ summa cum laude (adv.) 以優異的成績

A significant reason is (重要的例子)

例:Traveling is beneficial. A significant reason is that it enriches our lives and broadens our horizons.
旅行對人有益。例如,它豐富了我們的人生、擴展了我們的視野。

A vivid example is (活生生的例子)

例:He babies her. A vivid example is he cooks for her everyday.
他寵愛她。 例如,他每天為她下廚。

An example comes to mind (我這就有一個現成的例子 … )

例:The National Palace Museum has an unprecedented advantage in capturing ancient Chinese culture. An example , the jadeite cabbage, comes to mind .
國立故宮博物院在保存古老的中國文化方面得天獨厚。翠玉白菜就是 一個現成的例子 。

另一個

例子是

Another
example is

There's another
example

This example doesn't stand alone (還有例子 … )

例:第一個例子 + This example doesn't stand alone. + 第二個例子

例:Children can learn to respect animals under parental guidance. A supporting fact is that a child who is gentle with animals usually has parents who do the same. This example doesn't stand alone . A child who…  孩子經由父母引導而學習如何善待動物。 例如 ,父母如果溫柔地對待動物,孩子通常也會這樣做。 又例如 ,如果 …

This fact is supported by another example. (還有例子 … )

※ 不過這些都屬「正面的」例子

例:第一個正面的例子 + This fact is supported by another example. + 第二個正面的例子

A more insightful example is (還有例子 … )

※ 不過例子「更深入」、「更有意義」

例:第一個例子 + A more insightful example is that + 第二個例子

我永遠

不會忘記

I'll never forget

I'll always
remember

An image that never slips from my mind is ..(畫面永遠不會流逝)

例:An image that never slips from my mind is +敘述:the first time I saw a painting by Van Gogh in person.

A memory that will never fade away is ... (記憶永遠不會淡掉)

例:A memory that will never fade away is +敘述:the wonderful trip I took to Hokkaido with my family in 2008.

A scene that shall always remain fresh is ... (此景常新)

例:A scene that shall always remain fresh is + 敘述:the day my best friend got married.

 

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