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寫作範例:problem/solution
2024/08/20

※ 本文節錄自 貝塔語測論證型英文寫作速成教戰 》 作者:Quentin Brand


寫作題目 Cybercrime–crime involving computers-is becoming more common as we put more of our personal information online. What are the problems associated with cybercrime, and what can be done to solve them?

〈小叮嚀〉請留意兩個正文段落之主題句,你能否看出這兩句是如何最為概括, 以及段落中的其他各句是如何發展或對主題句提供具體的細節?

It cannot be denied that cybercrime is becoming more frequent. It’s my opinion that this is a very serious problem that will only get worse in the future. This essay will look at some of the common problems and will then suggest two solutions.

It is becoming easier for criminals to access personal information for their own uses. Take for example the way that personal banking information is now all stored on the cloud. It is very easy for criminals to access this information and steal money from ordinary citizens’ bank accounts. The financial industry should have foreseen this problem, and banks ought to have taken action to prevent this kind of crime. If banks were more careful about security, they wouldn’t have this problem.

The solution is to make banks and individuals responsible. Banks must be forced to improve their security systems so that hackers cannot access them. They should be made to refund any money stolen from their customers’ accounts, and they ought to be forced to pay a fine when a theft occurs. If we force banks to be more careful about security, this kind of crime might not be so common. Another solution is to make customers more aware of the importance of changing their passwords frequently. If people change their passwords regularly, it will make it more difficult for criminals to access their information.

In conclusion, cybercrime causes great harm to private citizens and public institutions. Overall, it’s clear that both banks and customers have a role to play in preventing it.

隨著我們將更多的個資放在網路上,網路犯罪(涉及電腦的犯罪)正變得越來越常見。
與網路犯罪相關的問題有哪些,可以採取哪些措施來解決這些問題?

不容否認的是,網路犯罪正變得更為頻繁。我認為這是個非常嚴重的問題,未來只會變得更糟。本文將探討一些常見問題,然後提出解決方案。

犯罪分子要取得個資來為己所用變得越來越容易。以個人的銀行資訊現在全都是存放在雲端為例。犯罪分子很容易取得這些資訊,並從普通國民的銀行戶頭裡竊取款項。金融業早該預見這樣的問題,而銀行應當要採取行動來防範這類犯罪。如果銀行對安全方面更加謹慎,就不會有這樣的問題了。

解決方法則是讓銀行與個人負起責任。銀行必須強制改善安全系統,使駭客無法存取。對於顧客戶頭裡所遭竊的任何款項,它們都該加以退還,並且在竊案發生時,應當要強制繳交罰款。如果我們強制銀行在安全上更加小心,這種犯罪或許就不會那麼常見。另一個解決方法是讓顧客更加警覺頻繁更改密碼的重要性。如果人們定期更改密碼,犯罪分子要取得他們的資訊就會比較難。

總之,網路犯罪會對普通公民和公共機構造成重大的損害。整體而言,很清楚的是,銀行和客戶都可以在預防方面發揮作用。

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